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Fatal Frame II Fatal Frame III Contest Entry Fanfiction Mio Amakura Mayu Amakura Kei Amakura

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#1 OFFLINE   FiliusMartis

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Posted 18 August 2013 - 11:00 PM

As promised, here is my predictably awful contest entry.  I'll be competing for the guidebook, please.  There are some warnings involved, so I am putting them behind a spoiler for those who just want to read it without.  If you are prone to triggers, please check the first spoiler box for warnings.

 

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#2 OFFLINE   estirose

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Posted 18 August 2013 - 11:05 PM

This is wonderfully sad. It captures the twins so well, and how Mio cares so much that she'd do anything.



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Posted 18 August 2013 - 11:24 PM

You captured the feeling of Mayu haunting Mio so perfectly that I'm sitting here freezing.  Just wow.  I really liked the comment about other Remainings experiencing the same thing; it just added a lot to the already bleak atmosphere and would make for another good fic.  Thank youuu for posting.



#4 OFFLINE   midwinter

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Posted 20 August 2013 - 02:11 PM

Oh wow, I have to agree with the others. The portrayal of the haunting is so bleak and eerie and heartbreaking, especially Mayu destroying Kei's books. There are a bunch of little details I liked as well, like Kei talking to Yuu and Mafuyu, the bit about the Remaining that Hex mentioned, and Mio's clothes being a reminder of Mayu because they chose their outfits to match. Don't put yourself down, it's the opposite of awful! I said it before, but I'm really glad you posted it.



#5 OFFLINE   Nephthys13

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Posted 25 August 2013 - 04:58 PM

Unfortunately I'm just echoing the same thing, the others have said: Your story is so incredibly sad and you captured the feelings of Mio so good...*Sniff* Why do you think it's bad? It's gorgeous! Especially the small details such as Kei's reactions or Mayu's changing in appearence. Amazing work!







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