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GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:18 AM) but also 3 hm
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:18 AM) so hard to choose dunno
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:19 AM) i can say though that my least favorite was 1
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:19 AM) cause when it finished i was like "ehm looks okay"
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:19 AM) and then i realised that i bought the whole game by mistake
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:19 AM) and not only the "free episode one"
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:20 AM) what was ur fav in the original?
Hex : (19 January 2018 - 02:22 AM) Oh man, it was lucky you ended up liking it!  :P
Hex : (19 January 2018 - 02:22 AM) E2, for Kate. I thought they did her story and those choices really well.
Hex : (19 January 2018 - 02:23 AM) The song at the end with the eclipse, ahh.
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:24 AM) who can dislike LiS :'CC
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:25 AM) Ep2 actually was one of the really few games that made me feel like bother for days
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:26 AM) and then i came to the oxymoron realisation that the game is great
Hex : (19 January 2018 - 02:28 AM) It is.  I really can't wait for dontnod's season 2.
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:30 AM) i am so curious about the new setting really
Hex : (19 January 2018 - 02:30 AM) I better catch some sleep, I hope you have fun with the next episodes!  G'night.  :)
GregZerO : (19 January 2018 - 02:32 AM) nighty hex 0/ thank u
AnimalLover4... : (21 January 2018 - 03:36 AM) How have you all been doing?
GregZerO : (21 January 2018 - 09:06 PM) Just took the decision to change my username here for the first time, even on previous forums I had "GreekShadow" but I feel that it was time to move on since i also kinda grew up.Other than that everything is pretty okay,calm days for me,what about you?
midwinter : (21 January 2018 - 10:20 PM) GreekShadow isn't GreekShadow any more, my whole world is shaken

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Fatal Frame II Fatal Frame III Contest Entry Fanfiction Mio Amakura Mayu Amakura Kei Amakura

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#1 OFFLINE   FiliusMartis

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Posted 18 August 2013 - 11:00 PM

As promised, here is my predictably awful contest entry.  I'll be competing for the guidebook, please.  There are some warnings involved, so I am putting them behind a spoiler for those who just want to read it without.  If you are prone to triggers, please check the first spoiler box for warnings.

 

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#2 OFFLINE   estirose

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Posted 18 August 2013 - 11:05 PM

This is wonderfully sad. It captures the twins so well, and how Mio cares so much that she'd do anything.



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Posted 18 August 2013 - 11:24 PM

You captured the feeling of Mayu haunting Mio so perfectly that I'm sitting here freezing.  Just wow.  I really liked the comment about other Remainings experiencing the same thing; it just added a lot to the already bleak atmosphere and would make for another good fic.  Thank youuu for posting.



#4 OFFLINE   midwinter

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Posted 20 August 2013 - 02:11 PM

Oh wow, I have to agree with the others. The portrayal of the haunting is so bleak and eerie and heartbreaking, especially Mayu destroying Kei's books. There are a bunch of little details I liked as well, like Kei talking to Yuu and Mafuyu, the bit about the Remaining that Hex mentioned, and Mio's clothes being a reminder of Mayu because they chose their outfits to match. Don't put yourself down, it's the opposite of awful! I said it before, but I'm really glad you posted it.



#5 OFFLINE   Nephthys13

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Posted 25 August 2013 - 04:58 PM

Unfortunately I'm just echoing the same thing, the others have said: Your story is so incredibly sad and you captured the feelings of Mio so good...*Sniff* Why do you think it's bad? It's gorgeous! Especially the small details such as Kei's reactions or Mayu's changing in appearence. Amazing work!







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